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Cymbeline's avatar

This is great! Keep it up!

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JARMAGIC | SHORT STORIES's avatar

Thank you for saying that! I was iffy about posting this because of the unconventional narrative. I'd love to know what stood out to you most, if you'd like to share.

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Cymbeline's avatar

What I liked most was the way you described everything that the mind was seeing and thinking and I kept on reading to see if a person was going to appear and thus clarifying that this mind would be a person called this or that and the casing which I imagine is the person’s body

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JARMAGIC | SHORT STORIES's avatar

You nailed it with the "casing" reference being a term to describe ones body. I'm curious about the person appearing thought than you were having? How did this unfold as you were reading?

Thanks again so much for the conversation on this. Very insightful!

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