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Dreamskeam's avatar

Well that was quite fu*ked up. Good twist.

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JARMAGIC | SHORT STORIES's avatar

I like how you put it. Thanks 😊

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Valbgood's avatar

Hello Jarmagic

I wish I could talk. I am talking my response. So forgive and errors . I feel like it's gonna be very long and this was a wonderful peice again and you know initially what's stood out was the word duplicity so I didn't know the meaning and I went to look it up and saw that I've been living a lot of my life in duplicity 🤭the mask 🎭so that was the first thing that came to mine, which is wonderful. You are an excellent writer please never doubt that! I would love to see you do a comedy piece because some parts were funny. I also love the fact that I initially thought that the friend was female and that was the vision of story that came to my mind so that change was great for me. The story started out to me light heart. A weekend getaway and you talked about being a great listener and how you tied it in at the end you hit on every topic you included comedy you had the friendship connection you have suspense you had which I am going to label you EFM you leave us Eager For More. Well done! As always excellent. I thank you for even inspiring my creative writing. Take care.

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JARMAGIC | SHORT STORIES's avatar

And here I was doubting myself...

Just wow! What a wonderful comment you've shared! Thank you so much for saying this! I wish I could express just how much it all means to me! Your insights help support me in ways nothing else can! I'm so glad to hear about how I've inspired your creative writing. I would be thrilled to have an opportunity to read what you've cooked up, if at any time you'd like to share, of course. Thank you for being a fan of my work and thank you for your time and supportive comments. I wish you all the best! (Stay in touch)💛

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